The Kashmir Area Debate

 Many people think differently about kashmir But my preference is that Kashmir should make their own country and not be apart of any county or they should find a way to end this war. They do need to end this war because many people have died and war cost a lot of money. I feel this way because its not open land it was and still is kashmir's land.

I think that kashmir should become their own country because this would fix numerous problems. For example the wars would stop and that alone would be good. In addition they already have a capital so there would be nothing to have to solve. Kashmir wants to become independent over 90% of their population wants to be independent. They also have a flag and government. As you can see if they switched to be independent they would not face many challenges in figuring things out.


Kashmir has been under war for 72 years, If they don't stop soon the price will really stack up. Many people have died from the war. Any way that this war stopping would be very beneficial. This would help kashmir's economy.


To restate what was previously said i think kashmir should become independent and become a different country. Also in addition to that pakistan and india should stop fighting over kashmir.


Comments

  1. AnonymousMarch 15, 2021 at 10:21 AM

    Great job, but I think you could've added more details, and make the introduction a little more interesting.

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  2. Winter CandyMarch 15, 2021 at 10:22 AM

    I feel like you blog, but this does not make sense to me "because its not open land it was and still is kashmir's land."

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  3. Ms. BoyleMarch 15, 2021 at 10:39 AM

    You did a nice job, but you have a lot of editing that needs to be done. Next time, make sure you do some good editing. Your closing paragraph could be a little longer too.

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